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Hello James, Thanks for sharing the screenshot of your writing. I can see you have used a verb and noun in the first stentence. Do you know what your next step is? A suggestion is to add more to your title so it is clear what your blog post is about. Mrs Krausse
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Hello James, Thanks for sharing the screenshot of your writing. I can see you have used a verb and noun in the first stentence. Do you know what your next step is? A suggestion is to add more to your title so it is clear what your blog post is about.
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