This is my speech when you comment please type your common opinion that will be very helpful to me. I wrote about this because I thought that I could convince some people about what their asking about. 1 thing I did very well was that I had many sentence structures in my speech . Next time I think that when I read it I think I could be louder.
Tuesday, August 13, 2019
Speech : Why Red Means Stop
This is my speech when you comment please type your common opinion that will be very helpful to me. I wrote about this because I thought that I could convince some people about what their asking about. 1 thing I did very well was that I had many sentence structures in my speech . Next time I think that when I read it I think I could be louder.
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Hi there, my name is Amandine and I am a student in hub 3 at Gisborne Intermediate School. I really like how you explained about what your speech is about and what you could improve on. It made me think of when I read my speech and posted about it. Have you thought about going back and fixing some of your punctuation.😊 If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://gisintamandinem.blogspot.com/😄
ReplyDeleteKia ora,my name is Piri and I am a student in Hub Mako at Gisborne Intermediate School. I really like that you asked for an honest opinion. It made me think of my speech
ReplyDeleteBecause I have also done one. Have you thought about your last name on your speech i reckon that, that is giving your identity away.. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://gisintpiripic.blogspot.com/
thank you armandine and piri that will be very helpful I will keep that in mind
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Sam and im in hub 3 at Gisborne Intermediate School. I really liked the topic and how you had all the different reasons. have you thought about checking your punctuation. If you would like to see my learning my blog is https://gisintsamh.blogspot.com/2019/
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Anamaria and I am a year 7 student in St Patrick's School located in Panmure. Your speeches were very nice and you had different reasons which is very impressive. You should post more of your speeches, a lot of people can learn from what you have posted. I don't really know what to say, maybe just make it more flash and presentable before posting it. Good job and I'm looking forward seeing more of your posts.
ReplyDeleteThank you to every one of you for commenting . Guys and gals you are so helpful these are very nice of everybody . Kind regards James F you will go a long way in life
ReplyDeleteHi James F, my name is Ida and I am a Year 8 student currently attending Saint Patrick's Panmure located in Auckland. Your speech was really good and helpful because you had many reasons which was really good. This is really helpful and many people can learn from what you had just posted. Overall this was a good post. Good Job and I'm looking forward to see more of your amazing posts.
ReplyDeleteIf you want to visit my learning blog here is the link: https://spsidaliahm.blogspot.com/